See how clear, confident editing transforms your writing.
Each example below shows a short before-and-after passage that highlights the precision and polish we provide.
Fiction
Novel Excerpt
Before: The night was quiet, and the sound of her footsteps echoed loudly as she walked down the empty street feeling nervous.
After: Her footsteps echoed through the still night, each one marking the silence that followed her unease down the deserted street.
Nonfiction
Article Opening
Before: Many people are unaware of how much time they spend online, and it can affect their focus in negative ways.
After: Few realize just how much of their day slips away online — and how that constant connection erodes focus and attention over time.
Academic
Research Paragraph
Before: The study was done to see how students learned best and it found that group work could maybe help them improve scores.
After: The study examined how students learn most effectively and found that collaborative work significantly improved performance outcomes.